Tom Michael Sullivan
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- Evaluation (8)
- Media Blog 101 (1)
- Planning (10)
- Preliminary Task (5)
- Research (18)
- The Brief (1)
6.5.11
15.3.11
You mark
28.2.11
Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt from the progression from it to the full product?
Also in my preliminary film, I saw that the shots were not very complex or steady whereas in my thriller opening the shots were more steady with a greater variation of shot type which also included the use of the golden mean and the rule of thirds. This made for a more interesting opening as it was not as long and tedious as my preliminary task which was effective as it allowed my audience to become immersed within the film from the opening and it also made them ask questions about the plot of the story especially as the ending of the film came at the beginning which is not the conventional way to start a film.
What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?


How did you attract/address your audience?

Who would be the audience for your media product?

What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?


How does your media product represent particular social groups?

In what way does your media product use, develope or challange forms and conventions of real media products?
In the titles to our film we chose to use the same producers as the Sixth sense as the film was a psychological thriller and so was ours which was the reason for choosing them although we did have other ideas of producers. The title we used was similar to that of Brick as we didn't want to use an extravagant entrance as that would make our opening seem more like a thriller which is why we found Brick's opening so influential.27.2.11
13.2.11
Deceit Titles
This style would make for an effective title as it is not neat which is good for our film as it suggeasts that beneath the surface there is a lot more happening and not everything has straight edges and is clear cut.
I also like this font style as it is very unclear which reflects our opening sequence as you do not understand why Jay dies and you also are unclear as to who the thrid character is but as the film progresses it clears up and becomes clearer.
This font style is very thick and bold. this would be effectice as it looks as though the person who wrote it is looking for attention and is very logical which is kind of like our thriller as Carley has decided to kill Jay for his money because she wants it and she also wants to be noticed by the other characters in the film.
Again this title would be effective as it looks very mysterious which would be good for a thriller opening as it would entice the audience drawing them into our story. Also having the E's backwards is very effective because it looks odd and stands out. I felt that this was what we wanted to show as well because Carley doesn't want to live an average life, she wants to be rich and live the life she has dreamed of.Character Descriptions and Casting

Eddie is playing the character of Jay who is a wealthy character with a very stereotypical male job but we also decided to change a few stereotypes such as a female character being killed as it is very common and builds upon the stereotype that women are weak which we challenged. We chose to wear the blues as they are seen as a clam neutral colour which will show the audience that he is not a threat and that he is the victim. We also had him dress casual as it fitted in with the unknowing, as you don't know who he is or what has happened. The character of Jay is also in a relationship with Carly
We chose Eddie to play the role of Jay as he is a very confident young individual who is not afraid to put in a good dramatic performance. Eddie was also very punctual when we were recording and was very respectful to the other characters in our film.
I am playing the character of Will who is Carley's (Jades) lover. I am wearing black and grey to show that I am a bad character which is communicated through the black and I also wore grey so that my character remained a mystery to the target audience as I do not reveal much about the sort of character I play, why I am murdering Jay and the relationship of me and Jade. I feel that this is effective as it makes the audience want to continue watching our film.
Jade is playing the role of Carley who is in a relationship with Jay, she is not like the typical female characters, she plays a strong willed and strong minded character which goes against several stereotypes which is what we aimed to do. Jade is also wearing black to show that she is a darker character and the red is also to symbolise the internal conflict and anger of her character as she is in a relationship and also has a love interest.
8.2.11
Thriller Opening Sequence - Script
Thriller Opening Sequence - Props, Costumes and Locations

A Knife – covered in blood to show that it’s the murder weapon.
Home Phone – this when a message is left warning Jay that something is going to happen to him but it does not give any details of the plot away so the audience can speculate as to what happened to Jay.

A Ring – On Jays finger showing that he is the victim at first then cutting to his normal life which will be used as a bridge between the opening to the film and when we see Jay alive for the first time.

The death scene:
Jay will be covered in blood and mud, the clothing, which was fancy will also be ripped showing that something bad has happened to him, and this can make the audience think about what has happened and why would it happen.
The two killers Carly and Will would be in dark clothing almost to show that they are hiding something.
The house scene:
Jay is wearing his tracksuits to show the viewer that nothing is wrong and doesn’t hint at that he will be murdered. It also shows that he has just woken up and that it is the day before which allows the aduience to try to figure out what has happened and to make them ask questions as to what happened during that day to end up with Jay dead.
Locations:
River/Woodland – This location is where the murder scene is and it’s a nice place for the opening of a thriller as it creates a sinister atmosphere making the viewer question at what has happened. Also, the woodlands can suggest that the death scene is empty; it’s a vast space where no one could help Jay.
House (bathroom/bedroom) – This location almost breaks the creepy, sinister atmosphere and bringing the mood back too an everyday life, which makes the viewer feel a lot more comfortable.
Thriller Opening Sequence - Sound
Footsteps – walking away from the murder scene, shows at how quite the scene is making it more creepy.
Breathing – to increase the tension in the opening and making the audience feel scared.
Alarm Clock – used as a sound bridge to break up the scenes.
Shower – makes the opening more everyday, almost reassuring the viewer.
Phone Calling – the audience questions, who is calling and why?
Answer Phone Message – increases the tension amongst the audience, and it almost gives them more clues.
Here are a few examples of the type of sound I would like to use:
Thriller Opening Sequence - Shot List
| Shot number: | Brief description of the action (What is going to happen in this shot?) | Description of Shot Type and Camera Movement |
| 1 | | |
| 2 | The victims hand in the water. | A high angle close up with no movement. |
| 3 | The killers walking away from the location that the murder happened. | A long shot with no movement. |
| 4 | The murderers walking away with the murder weapon in hand. | A close up shot tracking the murder weapon. |
| 5 | The victims hand in the water with the ring on to bridge the shots together. | An extreme close up with no movement. |
| 6 | The clock with the alarm going off at 07:00 am and then the victims hand turning it off with the ring to show that it is the same character earlier in the day. | An extreme close up with no movement. |
| 7 | The victim in bed with a ‘killer’ showing that he doesn’t know what is going to happen. | A mid shot tracking the victim. |
| 8 | The victim is getting out of bed but we are also going to show the next location. | A mid shot, which also establishes the next location with no movement. |
| 9 | The victim walking out to the hall to go into the bathroom. | A mid shot with no movement. |
| 10 | The victim walking into the bathroom. | A high angle shot with no movement. |
| 11 | The victim washing his face. | An over the shoulder shot with no movement. |
| 12 | The victim turning on the shower. | A mid shot with no movement of only the victims’ arm. |
| 13 | The victim getting undressed to go into the shower. | A low angle close up with no movement. |
| 14 | The victim entering the shower. | A mid shot with no movement. |
| 15. | The phone ringing. | A close up with no movement. |
| 16. | The camera shows that the victims’ bedroom is empty. | A mid shot panning the victims’ bedroom. |
Film Synopsis - Deciet
Opening Sequence Synopsis – Deceit
In the opening sequence of ‘Deceit’ we firstly see the 3 main characters Jay, Carly and Will, but we see the dead body of Jay then Carly and Will walking away from the body. But then it quickly cuts to the alarm clock where we see Jay and Carly together as a couple and living a normal life. While Jay is in the shower Carly leaves a phone message (almost setting him up) and then disappears. This leaves the audience questioning at what will happen to Jay, and then what is Carly up to?
7.2.11
Feedback on Research and Planning
I have just been right back through your blog to see how you have responded to the earlier round of teacher feedback you received in Mid January. I am really concerned that there is no evidence at all that you have gone back into your blog to check the comments we gave you about where and how you can improve, and I am really very concerned that you have not posted anything to your blog since Jan 18th. That was 3 weeks ago? What have you been doing?
Tom, there is an expectation for all subjects in A Level that each hour in class should generate at least another hour of work for you to complete outside of lessons.
You are targeted a B grade, but there is not a single post here for 'Planning' - you have been working on this section now for 4 weeks?!
This blog is currently not up to a PASS standard. You will have to spend quite a few hours now getting on top of it and getting it sorted out. The media room and all media teachers are very open to 6th form students coming in and working. We need to see you in there.
I have begun my FINAL marking of Research & Planning today for the rest of the class. As I am only looking at your blog now, you will have until this Friday 11th Feb to complete both sections.
I have spent quite a lot of time in the past going through your blog, giving you checklists of work to complete and giving you advice on how to improve your work - all to get you the best possible chance of gaining a B in Media. This is all pointless, if you do not work harder at completing your blog Tom.
Here is what I will expect to see - you have quite a bit to do:
Research Section:
Post 4 - You need to fix this one. JIN ran a lesson on this. You should watch the opening of the Sixth Sense and make a detailed list of all of the job roles that appear on the screen as the opeing credits role.
Post 8 - Brick needs images
Posts 9 - missing?
Post 11 - missing?
Post 14 - this needs to be visual. You should select 5-6 of your favourite movies in your chosen genre and take screen shots of key scenes to SHOW rather than tell the conventions of your genre. As you are aiming for a high grade, your work needs to reflect care and creativity - it needs to be visual
Post 16 - Read my comment - needs relevant pics
Posts 17-18 - Read my comments - needs proper questionnaire uploaded and an analysis of your findings in graph form.
Planning:
You have no posts?
There are 11 to do, and you will have these completed by Friday this week.
I will not be allowing you to go out filming while your blog is so incomplete. You will have to explain this to your group as I am sure it will be quite an inconvenience to them. You cannot film if you have no evidence of planning.
Final mark for you is this Friday 11th Feb.
18.12.10
Audience Research Results
Do you like the 'end' of a film at the beginning of the film?
The results from this question show that half of the people surveyed do not mind if the opening is at the beginning which suggests that as long as their interest is maintained during the opening which is essential for the enjoyment of any film.

What time of day do you like the thriller opening to be set?
Most of the people surveyed said that they want the opening to be set during the night time as it is a very eerie atmosphere which is essential for the start of the thriller to get the atmosphere correct for the rest of the film.

Do you prefer 'fast' or 'slow' paced music in the opening?
Our results from the survey show that people prefer slow paced music. This could be because slow paced music aids in the setting of an atmosphere which is needed throughout the film as it helps to entice the audience in the world in which we are creating for them.
17.12.10

- circle appropriate answer.
- Answer questions truthfully with your own opinion.
Question 1
Do you like the end of the film to be shown at the start?
Yes Sometimes No
Question 2
'I like a cliffhanger ending.'
Strongly Agree Agree Don't know Disagree Strongly Disagree
Question 3
Describe you ideal thriller location.
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Question 4
Do you prefer fast paced or slow paced music at the beggining of a film?
Fast paced Slow paced
Question 5
List 3 features you expect from the following characters:
Killer:
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Victim:
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Question
Do you like lots of titles at the start of the film?
Yes No
Question 7
What time of day do you expect a Thriller opening to be set?
Day time (Early Morning) Mid Day Nighttime
Question 8
Do you think the opening is an important part of the film?
Yes No
Why?
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Are you male or female?
Male Female
What is your age?
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14.12.10
My Thriller Images
I feel that this is a good shot as it follows the rule of thirds and it looks as though the trees/bushes on either side of the path are trying to cover the path. The shot is also good for the opening of a thriller because it is hard to tell what is at the end of the path and also, i feel that a thriller film is journey just like walking down this path.
I feel that this shot would be good for a thriller as the foreground is blurred which suggests movement to the prospective audience whilst the twigs and branches of the tree appear to be 'hiding' something which would raise questions to the audience engaging them deeper into the film.
12.12.10
Opening Sequence Analysis
Kill your friends uses a pan shot to show the opening titles. This is effective as it shows the audience aspects of the night before slowly, but it also has the names of the people who worked on the film hidden in the shots. This gives the viewer something to look for in every frame of the opening titles. A focus pull is used to draw the viewers attention onto the NME magazine which is showing the actors who are in the sequence. We can tell this is an opening sequence because it establishes the setting during the pan shot and is slow paced due to the editing.
The editing in kill your friends consists of mainly cuts bet there are a few transitions such as white flash which shows the audience that it has gone back in time and explained the previous shot by a flash back. This happens several times in the opening sequence but it also correlates with the party the night before, because as we begin we see the alcohol everywhere but as the pan shot continues we see drugs showing the audience how the night progressed.
In this opening sequence there was a lot of props, a few of which i have already mentioned but there a few clever techniques involved in prop selection. The credit card for example, has the name of the executive producer but the credit card is also there because of the drugs. All the props used fit in with the setting and the story that we have been shown through the flashbacks. the mise en scene of this piece relates to a student party or a high class sophisticated party because of the champagne. This tells the audience that the characters that haven't been introduced yet, are successful and maybe upper class as they are all in suits.
The sound in this piece is mostly non-diegetic as it is mood music to set the mood for the rest of the film.This shows that the morning after the previous night is very chilled out as nothing is moving but it also shows that only a fraction of the night before is remembered such as the flashbacks.
This is a very effective opening sequence as it doesn't give away the plot but it only provides the audience with snapshots of the night before which gives them the freedom to make up the rest of the night and also to let their imagination run wild with the possibilities of what could happen next.
Two Eyes Staring is a very different style of opening sequence to Kill Your Friends. The starting frames use an effect that looks as thought they are symmetrical and it also gives organic properties to the shots, such as one looks as though it is being filmed from the waters reflection on the surface. This property adds an eeriness to the shots making the audience feel on edge before the film has properly started. The opening images remind me of pictures that would be shown to psychopaths in older films to see what their interpretation of the images is, this could communicate to the viewer that what you see is not always correct creating an air of mystery.
In this opening sequence the only sound is non-diegetic where as in Kill Your Friends there was also diegetic sound. This aids in creating an eerie feeling as the music is very slow and mystical bridging between the shots. This opening would grab the audiences attention and prepare them for the film which is essential for a successful opening sequence.
This sequence is very low key and dull which also helps to calm the audience down before they start the film and to communicate to the viewer that what follows the sequence is very dark and ominous, it gives nothing away just like a good opening sequence should but it it would be hard for the audience to understand the reasoning for this selection of edits, shots and music until the film has begun or ended.
10.12.10
Double Indemnity Analysis






