I have just gone back through your blog to check that all work for Research & Planning is now complete.
I can see that since I called home and you spent some time working on your blog, you have made a good effort to get some posts completely sorted out in the Research Section. This is good to see. I am disappointed though now to see that you have not come back to the Planning section to fix up the posts I explained needed attention last time I looked. Please make ore effort to respond to teacher feedback.
Current mark: 10/20
Level: 2
Grade: D
To improve:
PLEASE RESPOND TO THE FEEDBACK YOU HAVE BEEN GIVEN.
Research:
The contact sheets you have added to your analytical posts do not look like you have created them. The work must be yours. You cannot copy a contact sheet from another student's blog. Please come and see me about this Tom. You must create your own.
Conventions of your genre: missing?
Conventions an opening sequence: missing?
Planning:
I cannot see that you have come back to improve this since I last looked??
Shot list - use proper school template I emailed to you
Sound - needs links to sound track / effects you will use with your explanation
Props / costumes / locations- visual???
Shooting schedule - missing? Use proper template
SJA
